
9. Beginning to Write Your paper
The Introduction | Writing Drafts | Grammar and Style
As you write your introductory paragraph(s), remember that your introduction is yet another vehicle to entice the reader to delve into your paper. It might be helpful for you to remember that that Latin term for "introduction is "exordium" which literally means "beginning a web." Your introduction should captivate the reader so that he is caught in the web of your writing. Try to find an interesting way to state your thesis to the reader so that he will both understand your project in writing the paper and will want to read on further.
Many students mistakenly believe that the first draft of their paper will be adequate enough to serve as their finished product. Usually this is a recipe for disaster. A well written paper usually has to go through several revisions before it is suitable enough to be handed in to an instructor. After you have written a first rough draft of your paper, read through it again with a critical eye. Sketchy sections may have to be beefed up with additional information; irrelevant or tangential material may have to be eliminated or relegated to your footnotes. You may also have to add transitional sentences or paragraphs to show the reader connections between ideas. Entire paragraphs may have to be shuffled around to see where they fit best. Remember, if your writing seems confusing to you, it will undoubtedly appear even more so to your reader. Before you hand in your final draft, go through your paper one last time. Check for spelling and grammatical mistakes; tighten up awkward sentences by eliminating excess verbiage; and replace boring verbs and adjectives with more dynamic ones. After you’ve finished writing multiple drafts of your paper, and believe that you now have the most perfect bit of research ever produced by mortal man, then, and only then, should you find another intelligent person to read over your writing. You will probably be surprised to discover how many mistakes still remain in your paper. Remember: your College Writing Lab is available free of charge to help you at this stage in your writing. Take advantage of this valuable service!
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